《随身而没》by蓝紫青灰
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多少人的痛苦都
随身而没，
从未开花、结实、
变为诗歌。
摘自诗人。 ——摘自诗人穆旦的诗作《诗》

内容标签： 都市情缘 情有独钟

主角：徐长卿，朱紫容 ┃ 配角：老叶，师哥舒，申以澄，刘卫星

         此文的题目，一开始一直以为是随身而设，颇有点理解不能的意味（好吧没有认真看简介）后来看到此词语在文中出现，才解其意，随身而没，大概是“人死了就啥都没有了”的文雅四字说法，或者是感情的自然消逝，定下了文颇有点淡然味道且注定不会太欢乐的基调。
       故事发生在一个特殊的年代，多半以男主徐长卿的视角展开，男主从上海调入“小三线”工厂工作，然后在这偏僻的落后于上海很多的山村里，遇到了他的师傅，朱紫容。师傅年轻，漂亮，体贴，技术能力强，师傅还有个丈夫，老叶，虽然外貌不甚出色，却同样是个极厉害的人，棋艺高超，会打猎，懂得享受生活，自己动手做火锅，麻将，似乎无所不能。徐长卿对师傅夫妻，是带着崇敬的，他和舍友常常去师傅家玩乐，老叶教了他们很多，山里的日子也变得不那么枯燥无聊。然而事实却全然不是那么美好。老叶擅棋艺，只是因了那场特殊的运动，一切文化技能都只能是废物，终究进了这么个小破山当个普通的工人。又因小地方医疗技术差而拖累了身体，得了病久治不好，身形委顿亦不能行夫妻之事。心气再高，命运却似乎一再嘲讽，妻子的体贴更让他深添歉疚。再加上那么个不怀好意的老童挑火，于是回本城无望，灰心放弃的老叶在一场豪赌之后，输了巨款，丢了对妻子的信任，最终也抛了性命。老叶一走，独留朱紫容一人，少了能干的老公，背着寡妇之名。周遭之人，女的从羡慕嫉妒恨转为鄙夷不屑；男的从暗里觊觎变成明里窥探。面对这一切，朱紫容沉默以对，鄙夷的眼神态度视而不见；刻毒的流言蜚语闻若未闻。在同事眼里，她做的每一件事情都惊世骇俗，为了还老叶赌博的巨额罚款，不惜委身给村里的“乡下人”，是丢了上海人的脸。在同事眼里，乡下人那是要低了好几个档次的，却不知他们的嘴脸，才是最丑陋可悲。她“不知悔改”，又一次和乡下人在一起，还被现抓了，罚入农场改造，却又做出要剪人命根子的疯子行径。
        徐长卿因了老叶临终前的嘱托，更因了心中不知不觉由尊敬变为恋慕的感情，想要保护她，照顾她，却始终只能当个离得比较近的旁观者，正如他后来所悟，她并不需要照顾，她比他们想象的都更为强。于是他也渐渐看懂了她，看到了只有当初舍友的女友小林才看出来的，她的伟大。她对老叶，不离不弃，始终不曾相忘。她一直在一个人战斗，从老叶病了开始，用自己的温柔体贴和快乐感染他，可惜最终敌不过对方太强的自尊和由此带来更深的自卑。老叶走后，她坚持自我，自认为对的事就去做，语言上的污水不予理会，行动上的侵犯决然反抗。而其后，她放弃自己做个不言不语的活死人，小半是生活是为了夫妻之恩，大半却是还夫妻之恩，因为老叶在最后始终选择了怀疑，埋在坟墓里的怀疑无法改变，那么她便用自己的错，来证明他的对。
        男主的单恋终究没能说出口，那爱慕最后大家都看出来了，更何况是心思玲珑的师傅。虽然未出口便被回绝了，但是他这个徒弟那一份关切和牵挂，也让朱紫容定下了从此好好过日子，不再当行尸走肉。最后是个分离的结局，一个考上大学终于回了上海，一个嫁予善良之人，当真好好过日子，多年以后，包括他们在内的那似乎被抛弃在山沟的工厂两千多人终于得以回到自己的家乡。
        这个文不知道怎么评来着，感觉像写了个故事简介，嘛，的确是不错的文来着，看了挺感触的。不过有出现一些上海方言描述和对白，可能会让人理解不能；还有某些想法心态感觉也只有本地人或者当初环境下的人才懂；另男主的名字导致经常出戏╮(╯▽╰)╭

Along the way, Yao Peng from time to time to look back at the little guy, and worry about the safety of
car smoke 14:00, 46 bus drivers Yao Peng yesterday to start their own first car trip. 15:30, the car arrived at the station five junctions. This is a bus station leaving many passengers are anxious to get on the train, At this point, the crowd squeeze in a small point. climb the bus hood, look right look left,铁观音, to climb their own music non-stop. The expression of the passengers and Yao Peng, a few eyebrows.

our reporter Wang Zhishe three and a half, you can do? Perhaps to answer said not very clear, perhaps not dare out of the adults embrace around us has such a bold three and a half: and him alone to go out, take twice the bus, from Xi'an east of the city shilipu City Nanpan Chuang, staged a reality version of

bus afraid not afraid



4 pm, Yao Peng buses arrive at the station,茶叶批发, his where the parents where home, anxious dispatch station staff. Soon, police aunts and uncles.
children's father, Mr Lo said that he was running errands, the mother of the child to go out to buy food to the children,养肝茶批发, Luoshuai five-year-old sister, two children at home. Bus stops close to home, his father often children take the 20 bus, he saw 20 road cars over, go up, sleepwalk and get off at the station five junctions,tiffany necklace, and then boarded the 46 road master driving Yao bus, came to the southern suburbs. Reporters yesterday's statistics site, from shilipu public transportation to the five intersection points, then the southern suburbs of Xi'an Pan Jia Zhuang, the entire process more than 20 kilometers.
ye dare to go out

the father is both happy and angry. The original more than 60 yuan to see the children dare to believe that all this is true.

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In fact, the parents of 5:00 pm, when they try holding the idea came to Xi'an Public Security the the Baqiao branch shilipu police station, and finally found that a child has long been well-meaning people.



little guy that afraid, is in the car too much, he touched the touch go

courage, but also not afraid of strangers often come out to play, but away from home are not far,安溪茶叶批发, this was too far.
there was a United States The movie Three and a half years old Luoshuai own unknowingly
The 17:00
yesterday, Xi'an Public Security Yanta Branch Secretary extended Fort police station, the Police aunt bent down and softly asked In his pocket only installed two cents, there are a few colored cards. 110 Command System queries, the police station, there is no loss of the child's information.


Luoshuai Yao Peng, bus drivers, accompanied by the police station waiting the the family

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