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情满月中天——评《晨光搁浅》by那焉

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评《晨光搁浅》by那焉
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每个人都有属于自己的一片森林,也许我们从来不曾去过,但它一直在那里,总会在那
里。迷失的人迷失了 ,相逢的人会再相逢。”
  我依旧迷失在那片森林里,时光在这似乎失去意义,只成为无数轮廓清晰的记忆碎片,

我看见年少时期的简浅,固执而倔强的跟着他,不顾一切,飞蛾扑火,而那人却越走越快,
越走越急,直到消失不见。

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    每个人都有着属于自己的初恋,有的已是沉年往事,而有的,只是刚刚开始。大多数的

初恋是辛苦的。初恋,是源于少年时期那第一次的心悸。当情爱在纯洁的心间悄悄的萌芽时
,那是最艰苦的守候,整个冬天苦苦等待,只为他那一次的回眸……
   于是,在等待中盼望着他的青睐,在等待中期许着他的回应。鼓起勇气向他表白,在倾听

到那一声:“YES,me too.”时,那份悸动就像春笋沐浴着雨露,一旦开始,便迅速占领一
整颗心,从此那片荒芜许久的土地变的勃勃生机,蓓蕾渐渐绽放出人生最绚丽的花朵,那片
天空,变的不再空旷,阳光明媚,白云相间,微风习习,处处芳草萋萋……
   更多的初恋则像是简浅与宗晨,于简浅而言,爱慕的人总是为些误解而不能接受自己,他

的一举一动时刻牵动着她的目光,他的一笑一颦总是她内心的晴雨表,而他在不经意间一句
无心的话,伤害着自己长达三年之久……
   尽管他们历经波折,尽管他们彼此伤害,但在简浅的内心深处那份纯真却使终不变,这是

我非常佩服她的所在。试想一个女孩子,在经历过生死,在经历过灾难、离别,确自始至终
能保持着那一份情的热忱,那是需要多大的爱恋才能成就的专情,是需要多坚强才能走过那
些枯燥、苍白的岁月?
   流年洗涤了他们的初恋,褪去青涩,剩下的是最真诚、纯净、坚韧的爱情。他们能够走出

雾霭的森林,步入晨曦,无疑又是一种幸运。是的,简浅是幸运的。命运再三的捉弄于她,
三番五次地给予她致命的打击,这个坚强的小女孩,活的尽管放肆但却坦诚,始终保持着那
颗平常的心。我想如果不是宗晨,这世上没有任何事、任何人能打动这个在孤独中倔强的女
孩子,感谢命运赐与了她宗晨,这一米的阳光的搁浅,将使那片冰冷的心,不再苍凉、孤独

    于宗晨而言,简浅是那午后的一杯清茶,拥有时是那么的清新、惬意,虽然并不成瘾,

但那份油然而生的平静与充实是那么的令自己留恋。起初时,并没有注意到这个小孩子的告
白是那么的珍贵吧,才一而再,再而三的拒绝,甚至以绝交相胁。最终能摆脱这个小女孩的
纠缠了,心却一下被什么东西挖的那么空,那么不自在!在看清自己的心后,明白了自己的
情感归属时,终却与她失之交臂……不,不能放任那份美好就此而去,一定要将她和她的那
份眷恋留住,哪怕是她竭斯底里的喊着要离开,哪怕是要以失去生命为代价……
    感谢这个现实却充满奇迹的世界,成就了简浅与宗成。弥补了我们对初恋的那份遗憾,

简浅的坚强令我为之动容。这也使我认识到了人生纵使有千般不顺,能有一人长居心间,世
界便不再冷清、无情,尽管独自守护着那份爱恋,但岁月从此不再有寂寞。
    作者是感性的,一件微不足道的小事,在她笔下却能表达出万千情感。全文叙事如散文

诗一样的精炼,将淡淡的忧伤渗透于字里行间,令人一看便爱不释手,欲罢不能,是不可多
得的一部言情小说。
    

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这个名字很熟悉,但是内容忘了~~
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西瓜的评,淡淡的几笔,却尽是深情缱绻,让人眼前一亮,清新隽永。
喜欢=v=
书也有种让人想看 的欲望了
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瓜,我觉得乃和乃家王二也是清新隽永的一种爱,虎么
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初恋那种纯美的感觉是啥都不能替代的
看乃的评就有点心痒痒想看书了
瓜妞妞继续爆发不
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用户被禁言,该主题自动屏蔽!
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看着书评前面还真不太吸引人,不过后段的还行,有了想看的冲动
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这本书看过,挺好看的。有点虐,不过还好是HE结局的
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U.S. paralyzed woman not to drag the family and boyfriend hunger strike death
Christina and Jimmy introduced by a friend met fell in love, but paralyzed the pain made her final choice of a hunger strike to death. According to British Christina in an accident six years ago, unfortunately the body paralyzed, a burden to loved ones and her boyfriend, she has gone through a painful struggle, ultimately decided to choose a hunger strike and died at the end of 2011.  

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before the death of Christina, she has left a dying wish, I hope to own ashes in the U.S. National Day - and the fireworks were put on the day of his birthday, bloom brightly in the sky. The face of the death of love, Jimmy overwhelmed with grief. ;


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Christina Linden City, New Jersey teachers, and her musician boyfriend,茶具, Jimmy, is introduced by a friend, acquaintance fell in love. Contacts after a period of time, Christina and Jimmy's feelings more and more deep, and gradually fall in love, and has developed to the stage gonna get married. Unfortunately, however, is precisely at this point come to the couple head. In June 2005, Christina with Jimmy to join her cousin's birthday party. Some drunken revelry,tiffany bracelet, she invites Jimmy to the swimming pool in the villa with her.
Since then, Christina's mental state is brought to its knees, the physical condition of every situation Kusakabe. Although nursing home care staff will take care of her,tiffany earring, but the personality of independence Christina still feel embarrassed, angry and upset and the situation can not take care of themselves in their own lives. Two years after the accident, she began to understand the legitimate end their lives through various channels.
Select from the escalator into the water,养肝茶团购, but stood mysteriously to a storage box, jumped down from above fell into the water after the moment my head hit the pool at the bottom of heavy, then I hear something crisp and Health broken voice. When I regained consciousness, they have face down floating in the pool, could not move. I think I was going to die. the first time he jumped out of the water to save Christina up, and call friends and relatives alarms save lives, but too late. Christina, that a serious accident paralyzed, life can not take care of themselves. According to Christina's description in his blog, life after paralysis is very painful,tiffany necklace, she often felt rather die than live. Her father and stepmother continue to blame her when drunkenness, brought a heavy burden to his family. They also cut off between Christina and friends, and she was not allowed to meet with Jimmy. Eke out six months after Christina and Jimmy had decided to break up.
the pain to heaven where those who love me free after my death. patients in the hunger strike without water after two weeks internal infection and died. So I think I found relief. sister and Jimmy went to the Disneyland Resort. But her most of the time because of physical discomfort to stay in a hotel room. Since then, she began a hunger strike. According to Christina's mother recalled, the daughter of a hunger strike often fall into a coma, confusion, and to speak on and off. Jimmy would often drive to see her, but every time she be able to say a few words are sorry the class of words. Day, more than two months after Christina last fell into a coma and never woke up.
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文案写的如此 "吸引人心" 感觉是个...嗯 还挺不错的样子
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